I can't believe I am already in Unit 7 and in my third term here at Kaplan University! Pretty soon, I will be filling out my application for my practicum. I am so nervous about that! Medical Terminology wasn't one of my strong subjects, but I have to start studying again when I have free time. Medical coders have to know the terms. You'd think it would be my strong subject since I really love reading and writing, but no!
I really feel proudly of my essay. The Kaplan Writing Center just sent me back their review of my rough draft. Some of the things they mentioned that I should work on are:
1. My reference page and APA formatting issues.
2. I used the word this alot and as a reader someone needs to know what 'this' is.
3. If I use the phrase 'I think...' I should provide facts on why I think this.
4. Minor grammatical issues.
5. Add more discussion to the third subtopic in my thesis statement (how embryonic stem cells can help a patient have a better quality of life).
6. When my essay talks about this or that, identify what this or that is.
Other things we are doing in unit 7 this week are peer reviews. So far though, I have not gotten any responses, but I am hoping to soon!
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